Question

16．生活中，每個人都有自己的心愛之物．你們學(xué)校的英語專欄將要刊登題為"我的心愛之物"的文章，請你撰稿，內(nèi)容包括你最喜歡的東西是什么，它是什么樣子的，你為什么喜歡它．
提示詞語：beautiful，meaningful，useful，remind，memory
提示問題：?What is your favorite thing？
?What is it like？
?Why do you like it？
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
However，when it comes to my favorite thing，a phone album comes into mind immediately．
然而，當(dāng)提到我最喜歡的，一個手機相冊立刻涌上心頭．
when it comes to 當(dāng)提到…，come into mind 涌上心頭．
【高分句型二】
 It  often reminds me of all the happiness I have had．
它總是讓我想起我所擁有的所有的快樂．
remaind sb of sth 讓某人想起…
I have had是省略了關(guān)系詞that的定語從句，修飾前面的happiness，關(guān)系詞做賓語，故省略．

解答 We get so many wonderful things in our life，some are beautiful，others are useful．However，when it comes to my favorite thing，a phone album comes into mind immediately．【高分句型一】（心愛之物是什么） It is a very beautiful one with all kinds of phones of mine at all ages，（什么樣子的） from the moment I had my first baby step to the colorful life when I was in kindergarten； from the time I was with my friends to the precious holidays I spent with my family．My mother gave it to me as a gift for my 14^th birthday．I fell in love with it at first sight because it's more than just a photo album，it is a record of my childhood，holding so much love and beautiful memories．It often reminds me of all the happiness I have had．【高分句型二】Every time I go through the photos，I feel warm and joyful．（為什么喜歡） It is my treasure forever．

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