Question

【題目】寫作

你有一個朋友，請你根據(jù)以下信息向大家介紹一下他的情況，所有要點(diǎn)都要寫上，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。不少于40字。

First name :Jack	School: PEP Middle School
Last name: Brown	Class: Class 1, Grade 7
Age:13	Family member(成員)：father, mother and sister
Telephone number:8797236	Hobby（愛好）: read books and play basketball

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have a friend named Jack Brown.Jack is his first name and his last name is Brown.He is 13 years old.He studies in PEP Middle School.He is in Class 1, Grade 7.His father is a teacher.His students all like him. His mother is a doctor.She likes her work.He has a sister.She is also a student.They are in the same school.He likes reading books and playing basketball in his free time.His telephone number is 8797236.

【解析】

試題分析：短文是介紹自己的朋友的情況，所以句子應(yīng)該用第一人稱單數(shù)，用一般現(xiàn)在時，不要遺漏信息，可以適當(dāng)增加一些信息，要注意句子的語法正確，要句子上下文的銜接。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：He is in Class 1, Grade 7.They are in the same school.He likes reading books and playing basketball in his free time.提醒學(xué)生平時注意積累一些短語和句式，多背一些范文。短文用了一些連詞and等，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。