Question

18．根據(jù)所給圖畫，用英語寫一篇約 80 詞的短文．要求完整敘述圖畫內(nèi)容．
Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends．He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers．As a result he got drunk．
After the meal，his friends tried to persude him not to drive home，but he didn't listen to them，saying No problem and insisted on doing so．
He got into the car and drove away．A few minuties later，he was winding his way in the street．And suddenly his car ran into a tall tree．He was badly injured but still alive．The police came to the scene，and he was taken to hospital．
He had to stay in hospital for a few days beacause of being seriously hurt．He was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)所給圖畫講述一個醉酒開車的故事，時態(tài)主要為一般過去時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
描述圖畫；我的叔叔被邀請去吃飯，喝醉了酒，執(zhí)意要開車回家，車子撞樹上了，受傷住院，被罰款駕照吊銷

 
常用到的重點短語：
try to do sth 盡力做某事
persude sb to do sth 勸某人做某事
insist on doing sth 堅持做某事
because of 因為

【高分句型】
1．He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers．
so…that，如此…以至于，that引導的結(jié)果狀語從句．
2．He had to stay in hospital for a few days beacause of being seriously hurt．
because of 因為，of是介詞，后加名詞，代詞或動名詞．
3．He was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked
was fined和was revoked是一般過去時的被動語態(tài)was/were+過去分詞．

解答 Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends．He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers．【高分句型】As a result he got drunk．（第一幅圖）
After the meal，his friends tried to persude him not to drive home，but he didn't listen to them，saying No problem and insisted on doing so．（第二幅圖）
He got into the car and drove away．A few minuties later，he was winding his way in the street．And suddenly his car ran into a tall tree．（第三幅圖）He was badly injured but still alive．The police came to the scene，and he was taken to hospital．
He had to stay in hospital for a few days beacause of being seriously hurt．【高分句型】He was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked．【高分句型】（第四幅圖）

點評 這是一篇看圖作文．看圖作文要注意一下幾點（1）弄清圖畫內(nèi)容，把握情節(jié)線索，根據(jù)圖畫在腦海中串聯(lián)出完整的故事，注意圖畫中的細節(jié)． （2）結(jié)合提示詞，明確考查意圖．所給提示詞可幫助理解畫面內(nèi)容，也是組成句子的必用材料．有時還會給出起始句（這就給出了時態(tài)），學生運用正確的時態(tài)，運用所給或所學的詞語，盡量運用熟悉的句型，作適當展開，聯(lián)想，就能比較完整地表達出畫面的意思了． （3）切忌堆砌詞語，句子，注意運用適當?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫． （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標點符號等的正確運用．（5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動詞時態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等．
這篇短文能把握故事情節(jié)，能正確的運用過去時態(tài)．合理的利用連詞，如As a result，After the meal，but，A few minuties later，And suddenly等，這使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理．