Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

初中生活即將過(guò)去，是時(shí)候?qū)ψ约喝�年的學(xué)習(xí)生活進(jìn)行反思了。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容，將三年來(lái)的學(xué)習(xí)生活進(jìn)行回顧與總結(jié)。

對(duì)自己滿意的方面
交了一些好朋友，并且玩得很愉快
加入了不同的學(xué)校俱樂(lè)部
九年級(jí)時(shí)我的英語(yǔ)水平已經(jīng)提高了
對(duì)自己不滿意的方面
七年級(jí)時(shí)，我課堂上不努力學(xué)習(xí)
八年級(jí)時(shí)，我的英語(yǔ)成績(jī)很差，在發(fā)音和讀課文方面有困難
對(duì)進(jìn)入高中后的打算
期待著考入理想的高中
加入學(xué)校游泳隊(duì)

要求：語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】My Time in Junior High School

My time in junior high school has been enjoyable. In the first year, I made some good friends, joined the different school clubs and had a lot of fun, However, I didn’t work very hard in class. In Grade 8, I studied harder but I still got poor grades in English, and I had problems with pronunciation and reading texts. This year, with Mr. Zhang’s help, my English level has been improving and I have the ability to do good work. Next year, I will be in senior high school. I can’t believe how fast the time went by! When I get go senior high school, I will study harder and join the school swim team. I want to make my parents and teachers proud of me.

【解析】

寫作思路：本篇作文是回憶自己的初中三年以及對(duì)高中生活的展望，故在時(shí)態(tài)上要用到一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí);有滿意的地方，有不滿意的地方，兩方面可以對(duì)比寫作。最后對(duì)高中的生活進(jìn)行規(guī)劃。本篇作文首先以My time in junior high school has been enjoyable.進(jìn)行開篇點(diǎn)題，In the first year,…寫出自己的收獲，然后However轉(zhuǎn)換話題，接下來(lái)描述自己初中三年的遺憾，以及在老師的幫助以及自己的努力下提高了英語(yǔ)成績(jī)。Next year, I will be in senior high school.作為過(guò)渡，接下來(lái)寫自己高中時(shí)的計(jì)劃，并用I want to make my parents and teachers proud of me. 做最后的總結(jié)。文章內(nèi)容全面，符合寫作要求，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)。