Question

14．最近你結(jié)識了一位新筆友，請根據(jù)以下信息，簡單介紹一下你的新筆友．要求不少于50詞．
名字：Tom   國籍：美國        居住地：紐約     語言：英語和漢語
喜歡的動物：考拉，因為很可愛    喜歡的天氣：晴天和雪天
愛好：看報紙，雜志，攝影        夢想：做一名老師．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，介紹一個新筆友．本文做給材料比較詳細，動筆前先根據(jù)材料確定時態(tài)，句式，詞匯等主要內(nèi)容．根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱應該是第三人稱．寫作中注意使用連接詞，注意表達的多樣化，做到語意連貫符合邏輯．
高分句型：
①In his free time，he likes reading magazines and newspapers．在業(yè)余時間，他喜歡看雜志和報紙．句子中l(wèi)ike doing sth表示喜歡做某事．
②He wants to be a teacher when he is older，because he thinks it is an interesting job．他長大后想當一名教師，因為他認為這是一項有趣的工作．這里want to do sth表示想做某事，because在這里引導一個原因狀語從句．

解答 I am glad that I have a new pen pal．（引出話題） His name is Tom．He is a lovely boy．He comes from American．And now he lives in New York．He speaks English and Chinese．（介紹他的基本信息）His favorite animals are koalas and giraffes，because koalas are very cute and giraffes are very friendly to people．（最喜歡的動物）He enjoys sunny days and snowy days，because she loves sunshine and snow．（最喜歡的天氣）In his free time，he likes reading magazines and newspapers（高分句型）．He also likes taking photos．（空閑時最愛做的事情）He wants to be a teacher when he is older，because he thinks it is an interesting job．（高分句型） A teacher is very busy but he likes students．（理想）
   I like Tom very much and I hope his dream will come true!（祝愿）

點評 在寫書面表達是首先要注意的問題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱；其次，應注意動詞的英語，根據(jù)不同的人稱確定動詞的形式；再次，句型應該符合英語的表達習慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句．