Question

【題目】大作文 ， 根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù) 60—80 詞 （15分）

你的美國網(wǎng)友Tom 要來中國，他在網(wǎng)上向你咨詢中國的一些社交習俗和禮節(jié)，請你給他發(fā)一封email ，從問候，就餐，到朋友家里做客方面，給他一些在中國怎樣能夠舉止得體的建議。

要求：字跡工整，語句通順，語法正確。 開頭已給出。

Dear Tom,

You must be excited about coming to China soon.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions and advice about Chinese customs. When you meet somebody for the first time in China, you should shake hands and say, “How do you do?” You don’t need to bow or kiss the side of the face. When you are eating at the table, it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into the food. You are not supposed to point others with your chopsticks. You’d better not speak with your mouth full. In our house, you’re supposed to take off your shoes before entering the house. It’s impolite to show up at someone’s house for the first time with empty hands.

Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon!

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文多次使用固定短語如be supposed to，take off，show up，look forward to等等為文章增色不少。學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。