Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。（15分）

根據(jù)以下提示，以“Helping Others Is Happy:'為題，寫一篇英語短文。

內(nèi)容：1．過去我將錢花在買衣服和零食上；

2．老師告訴我們有許多貧困兒童沒有衣物和食品，更不能上學(xué)；

3．從那以后，我將零花錢捐給一個(gè)幫助兒童的組織；

4．我為能幫助別人而自豪。

要求：80詞左右。

提示詞：buy clothes and snacks，poor children，from then on（從那以后），

give away，organization, proud(驕傲，自豪)

Answer 1

【答案】

Fellow students, I’m glad to tell you something about my study and everyday life.

Li Ming is good at his lessons and his favorite subject is English. He is friendly to others and willing to help others. He always has many things to do in the spare time. And he has his own hobbies. He likes to surf the internet to get what he wants. He likes music very much. I think we should learn from Li Ming. Students should study hard and also enjoy life out of class.

Thank s.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如He likes to surf the internet to get what he wants.等，I think等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。