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【題目】同學(xué)們,中考結(jié)束后,美好的暑假生活就要開啟。假設(shè)你們班將組織一次外出旅行,班級提供去舟山和北京兩個地方供同學(xué)們選擇,請根據(jù)下表的信息提示,選擇一個你喜歡的地方， 然后以I prefer traveling to__. 為題, 用英語寫一篇短文向班刊Teens投稿，闡述你喜歡那個地方的理由。

	Zhoushan	Beijing
Transportation	bus, 2 hours, 42	high-speed train, 7 hours, 650
Weather	not very hot, wet	hot, dry
Hotel	98/night, clean	298/night, comfortable
Things to do	go to the beach ...	visit many famous places...
Food	...	...

要求：1) 短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格內(nèi)所提供的你選擇的那個城市的所有信息，并可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文通順；
2）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名等信息；
3）詞數(shù)：80～100（短文開頭已給出，僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)）。
I prefer traveling to __
( Summer vacation is coming, our class are going to have a nice trip. Some students would like to travel to Zhoushan, while others want to travel to Beijing .The place I prefer is...)
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Answer 1

【答案】Possible versions:
Summer vacation is coming, our class are going to have a nice trip. Some students would like to travel to Zhoushan, while others want to travel to Beijing .The place I prefer is Zhoushan.
Zhoushan is not far from here. We can go there by bus which will take us about 2 hours and the ticket is cheap, only 42 yuan a person. Though the weather there in June is quite wet but it's not very hot. So we will feel comfortable there. The hotel there is quite clean and not very expensive, only 98 yuan a night. There, we can go to the beach and breathe fresh air. We can also go swimming. It'll be very relaxing! What's more, we can eat lots of delicious seafood!
I'm sure if we travel to Zhoushan, everyone will have great fun!
Summer vacation is coming, our class are going to have a nice trip. Some students would like to travel to Zhoushan, while others want to travel to Beijing .The place I prefer is Beijing.
First, we will take a 7-hour-train journey so as to enjoy the beautiful scenery on the way. Besides, there are many comfortable hotels to choose, though a little bit expensive. It will cost at least 298 yuan every night. Possibly the weather is hot and dry, but I can stand it.The most important is that as a capital city, we can visit a number of famous places there, such as Tiananmen Square, the Summer Palace and so on. We can learn a lot about the history of our country. What's more, we can eat Beijing Duck there. It must be very delicious! So I prefer to spend my holiday in Beijing. What about you?
【解析】這篇作文要求我們寫一篇投稿，內(nèi)容是關(guān)于中考結(jié)束后，班級要組織一次旅行，班里提供了舟山和北京兩個地方進(jìn)行選擇，你選擇一個喜歡的地方，并闡述喜歡去這個地方的理由。這是一篇話題作文，題目中只提供了寫作的要求，具體的內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己獨立組織完成，這就需要學(xué)生們發(fā)揮自己的想象力和語言的組織能力，這也是這篇作文的一個難點。寫作的時候，應(yīng)先闡述自己選擇的是哪一個地方，中心是闡述理由。例如在那里我們可以做些什么，有什么有意義的事情等。注意英語表達(dá)和漢語的不同，不要寫漢語式的英語，要注意語法的規(guī)范。文章中使用一些平時積累的教好的句型和短語，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。句子之間使用一些連詞，使文意更加連貫。