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【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作,請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。

三年的初中生活,你對自己的表現(xiàn)一定有滿意的方面和不滿意的方面。假如你是林微,請參照以下提示,給你的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們用英語寫一篇畢業(yè)留言,希望對他們有所幫助。

	提示內(nèi)容	提示詞
對自己滿意的方面	勤學(xué)好問,有良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣;……	work hard,a good habit of
對自己不滿意的方面	忙于學(xué)習(xí),鍛煉身體較少;……	be busy,do less sports
對學(xué)弟學(xué)妹的建議或希望	樂于助人,積極參加志愿者活動(dòng);……	be glad to,volunteer activities

注意:1.參照提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名;

3.詞數(shù)80左右(開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

Dear boys and girls,

I’m Lin Wei.It’s my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear boys and girls,

I’m Lin Wei.It’s my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years.I am hard-working and have made great progress.I have developed many good habits of learning.I did well in the exams.However,I have problems,too.I spent more time online and I have become quite weak in my eyesight.What’s more,it’s also a pity that I did less sports because of hard work.

In the future I hope you can understand the saying,“A friend in need is a friend indeed”.So you should be glad to help others if someone is in trouble.I also hope you all can take an active part in some volunteer activities,such as being a volunteer in protecting the environment,helping disabled children and so on.

Thank you,my teachers and schoolmates.Wish my school more beautiful,and my teachers and schoolmates a happy life!

Yours,

Lin Wei

【解析】這是一篇圖表作文。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文時(shí)態(tài)用到了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過去時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。在寫作過程中，首先要將表格內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確的表達(dá)出來，要涵蓋表格中提到的所有要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫。然后條理清楚的寫出對自己滿意的方面、對自己不滿意的方面、對學(xué)弟學(xué)妹的建議或希望，可適當(dāng)增加相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)，使意思表達(dá)更完整�？墒褂靡恍┕潭ň涫交蚨陶Z，以便為文章增色。