Question

背景設(shè)定：為了保護(hù)環(huán)境，節(jié)約能源，中國(guó)政府出臺(tái)一條禁令：從2008年6月1日起，禁止在超市和商店中使用塑料袋。為此學(xué)校組織了一次討論會(huì)，請(qǐng)同學(xué)們暢所欲言，發(fā)表自己的看法。下面是汪進(jìn)峰同學(xué)的發(fā)言?xún)?nèi)容：

姓名	發(fā)言中心內(nèi)容
Wang Jinfeng	1,禁令內(nèi)容：禁止使用塑料袋;阻止超市、商店向顧客提供免費(fèi)塑料袋；如果提供需要付費(fèi)。 2，個(gè)人認(rèn)識(shí)：對(duì)我們有益；能幫助保護(hù)環(huán)境。原因：a）引起白色污染。b）污染環(huán)境和水。c)生產(chǎn)塑料袋浪費(fèi)能源。目的：貫徹執(zhí)行禁令，改善環(huán)境   3，今后的做法：鼓勵(lì)家人、朋友購(gòu)物時(shí)自帶布袋、籃子；不亂扔垃圾，對(duì)塑料瓶、易拉罐等進(jìn)行回收……

請(qǐng)根據(jù)Wang Jinfeng 同學(xué)的發(fā)言?xún)?nèi)容，以他的名義寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。（15分）

要求： 1.圍繞汪的觀點(diǎn)和意愿進(jìn)行表達(dá)，內(nèi)容要適當(dāng)拓展；

2.內(nèi)容必須包含上表3個(gè)要點(diǎn)；

3.詞數(shù)80—100，開(kāi)頭已給（不記入詞數(shù)）。

提示詞匯：ban (禁令),provide, free (免費(fèi)), protect, cause, pollute, soil(土壤), energy, improve, recycle soft, drink, can(易拉罐)

Dear everyone!

China has put a ban on the use of much plastic bags starting on June 1, 2008.

                                                                              

                                                                                              

                                                                             

                                                                                       

    

That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Hello，everyone!

China has put a ban on the use of much thinner plastic bags starting on June 1，2008．The ban can stop the supermarkets and shops from providing free plastic bags．People should pay for every plastic bag if they need it．

I think this ban is very helpful to us．It helps to protect our environment．In my opinion，plastic bags can cause “white” pollution and they can also pollute the soil and water．They are harmful to our health．What's more，producing plastic bags can waste a lot of energy，too．So we should carry out this ban in order to improve our environment．

What should we do? I think We should encourage our family members to carry cloth bags or baskets when they go shopping．In the school，we mustn't throw the rubbish everywhere．We should reduce the waste，reuse some bags and recycle plastic bottles，soft drink cans，waste paper and so on．If every one of us does like this，our environment will be better and better．

That's all for my speech．Thanks for listening!

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。所給材料中已經(jīng)明確了文章體裁為演講，并給出了演講的相關(guān)內(nèi)容。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，可以根據(jù)所給的材料組織好結(jié)構(gòu)和語(yǔ)言�？梢允褂玫谝蝗朔Q(chēng)，注意句子的完整性和主謂一致。句與句之間可使用合適的連詞，使文章更緊湊和流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)分析】

這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰明了，表達(dá)通順流暢，并大量的使用了短語(yǔ)和句式，如：stop…from doing sth.停止做某事；In my opinion 在我看來(lái)；Be harmful to對(duì)……有害；carry out執(zhí)行；in order to為了；encourage sb. to do sth.鼓勵(lì)某人做某事；better and better越來(lái)越好，等等；另外文中用了很多連詞,如what’s more, so, if, and 等等。

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