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2．近來，中小學(xué)生的健康問題日益引起人們的關(guān)注．其中垃圾食品、電子游戲等是影響健康的重要因素，請(qǐng)以"Keep Healthy"為題談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />要求：
1．列舉中小學(xué)生面臨的健康問題．
2．談?wù)勗鯓硬拍鼙３纸】担?br />3.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
4．語法正確，文理通順、流暢，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
提示詞：junk food，be bad for，computer games，suggestions，stay away from
Keep HealthyToday，some students have several health problems．      ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文．要求介紹中小學(xué)生面臨的健康問題并談?wù)勗鯓硬拍鼙３纸】担�主要用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．

①They always have too much homework to do．他們總是有太多的家庭作業(yè)要做；句子中too much意思是太多，修飾不可數(shù)名詞，to do在這里作后置定語，修飾homework．

②If we can develop healthy habits，we will be healthier and happier．如果我們能養(yǎng)成健康的習(xí)慣，我們就會(huì)更健康，更快樂．句子考查if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句用一般將來時(shí)，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．

解答 Keep Healthy
Today，some students have several health problems．（引出話題）Some don't have enough time to sleep．Some don't have a healthy diet and often eat junk food．Some are crazy with computer games or play with mobile phones too often．A lot of students are too busy to do sports．They always have too much homework to do（高分句型）．（中小學(xué)生面臨的健康問題）What should we do to keep healthy Firstly，I think we need about eight hours'sleep every day．Secondly，we should learn to relax．We can do sports every day，such as running and playing ball games．Thirdly，we should eat more vegetables，fruits and less fast food or junk food．Also，we are supposed to pay more attention to our study and stay away from computer games or our smart phones．（如何保持健康）
If we can develop healthy habits，we will be healthier and happier．（高分句型）（發(fā)出倡議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 此題為提綱作文，要仔細(xì)審題，抓住描述的重點(diǎn)，把所給信息條理清楚的表達(dá)出來，要求語句通順，單詞，語法，時(shí)態(tài)正確，書寫規(guī)范，字?jǐn)?shù)合乎要求，切忌出現(xiàn)中文式的英語，這樣才能算是一篇好作文．