Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)：

你住在城市還是鄉(xiāng)村呢？你更想住在什么地方？請(qǐng)寫一篇以 I Prefer Life in the 的短文。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.你現(xiàn)在住在哪里？

2.你更喜歡的居住地 (城市，鄉(xiāng)鎮(zhèn)或鄉(xiāng)村)

3.列舉出三個(gè)理由。

4.建議大家愛護(hù)環(huán)境（至少2點(diǎn)），讓每個(gè)地方都變成宜居之地。

5.把題目補(bǔ)充。

6. 60個(gè)單詞左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

I prefer life in the __________________________

Different people have different ideas. _________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

I prefer life in the country

Different people have different ideas.I 'd love to live in a country because as far as the development of our country, the environment in our city has become more and more depressing.Though now we live in the same apartment but we have few communicate with others,we even don't know the name of our nearest neighbor.In a contrary,when we stay In a village,we can see the honest smile everywhere.What's more,we can't enjoy the nature in the city.you will just see the cars and the top buildings everywhere.So I prefer to have my symple life in country.Please protect our environment and make every place comfortable and convinient to live.

【解析】

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