Question

【題目】感恩是一個永恒的話題，我們應該對幫助過自己的人心存感恩。感恩之際，我們也應該心存善念，去幫助需要幫助的人。請你以“Learn to Be Thankful”為題，根據(jù)以下提示和要求寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。

提示：1. 描述某人(如父母、老師、同學、朋友甚至陌生人等)在學習、生活上幫助過你的某件事；

2. 你幫助過某人的事；

3. 你對這些事的感想。

要求：1. 文章必須包括所給提示中1-3項的內(nèi)容，可展開思路，適當發(fā)揮；

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息。

Learn to Be Thankful

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Answer 1

【答案】Learn to Be Thankful

I still remember a rainy day when I was in Grade 7. On that day, I overslept and hurried to school by bike. At a street corner, I fell down and hurt my legs so badly that I couldn’t move at all. A passer-by sent me to the hospital at once. I was so thankful that I decided to help others from then on. A few weeks later, on my way to school, I saw a blind man standing at a crossing. I helped him cross the street and showed him to the place that he wanted to go to. How happy I was!

It’s important to learn to be thankful. If everyone can help each other, the world will be full of love.

【解析】【亮點說明】這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如in Grade 7，by bike，fall down，at a street corner，at all，at once，from then on，on my way to school，a few weeks later，learn to be thankful，help each other，full of love等。而I still remember a rainy day when I was in Grade 7./ I fell down and hurt my legs so badly that I couldn’t move at all. / If everyone can help each other, the world will be full of love.等多種從句結構的運用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。