Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（15分）
光華中學(xué)準(zhǔn)備采取一些措施減輕學(xué)生的負(fù)擔(dān)，于是向?qū)W生廣泛征集意見(jiàn)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面要求向?qū)W校提交一份減負(fù)的建議。
要求：1.所提措施有理有據(jù)，能確實(shí)起到減輕學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)的作用；
2.能適當(dāng)?shù)�、正確地運(yùn)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)和形容詞的比較等級(jí)；
3.80個(gè)單詞左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Headmaster,
I am glad to hear that you will lighten(減輕) the burden(負(fù)擔(dān)) of us students. ______________________________
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Yours 
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear headmaster,
I am glad to hear that you will lighten the burden of us students. It’s true that we have too heavy a burden of study every day. It makes us feel stressed out. I hope you will let the teachers give us less homework every day, so we will have more time to relax ourselves. Can we have fewer Chinese, English and math classes a day? Can we have more music, art and PE classes a week? Can we have more time to enjoy our hobbies? I think if we are asked to spend les time on study, we will pay more attention to it. That’s my advice. I hope they can come true.
Yours, 
Li Hua

本題是寫(xiě)一篇給定要求的建議書(shū)，寫(xiě)作的話(huà)題為向?qū)W校建議有關(guān)減負(fù)的事，具體內(nèi)容包括學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重，應(yīng)該減少學(xué)生的作業(yè)，每天上更少的語(yǔ)數(shù)外，可以上更多的音樂(lè)，，美術(shù)和體育，讓學(xué)生們有更多的時(shí)間來(lái)享受他們的愛(ài)好，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意符合題意和不同時(shí)態(tài)的使用，同時(shí)應(yīng)注意語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性。