Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是Liu Yi, 你的一位英國筆友來信詢問你的生活和學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。請你根據(jù)下面的表格，向他介紹你的近況。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

要求：1. 書寫美觀，段落清晰；2標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，注意細(xì)節(jié)，不少于80個詞。 3. 包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)拓展；

個人信息	住在大賣場附近，它有五層的商店，是個購物和見朋友的好地方。
喜歡的節(jié)日	比較喜歡春節(jié)，因為春節(jié)期間可以觀看焰火，穿新衣服、拿紅包、拜訪朋友….
	最喜歡萬圣節(jié)，可以做南瓜燈籠，戴上面具喬裝打扮并且玩一種游戲….
生活習(xí)慣和愛好	有健康的生活方式，平時不吃零食，愛吃水果和蔬菜。早睡早起， 經(jīng)常做眼保健操和課間操以便保持健康,對集郵很感興趣….
我的夢想是……..	…….

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your letter.

My home is near the mall. The mall is very big.

I like the

I also have a healthy lifestyle.

I hope

All the best,

Liu Yi

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

Thank you for your letter.

My home is near the mall. The mall is very big. It has five storeys and is a great place for shopping and friends. I like Spring Festival better because I can get many red packets and often visit the relatives and friends with my family. I can watch TV and play computer games for many hours .In the evening we can have a big dinner and watch fireworks .We have a good time.

I like Halloween best. On that day I can make pumpkin lanterns, wear masks, dress up and play a game“Treat or Trick”.

I also have a healthy lifestyle. I do not usually eat snacks.I love fruits and vegetables. I get up early in the morning and go to bed early in the evening.I often do eye exercises and do morning exercises during the break between classes in order to keep healthy.I am interested in collecting stamps.

I hope you have a healthy lifestyle.Can you tell me about you?

All the best,

Liu Yi

【解析】

亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如thank for, Spring Festival，watch TV，play computer games，have a big dinner，have a good time，watch fireworks，dress up，play a game，a healthy lifestyle，do eye exercises，in order to，keep healthy，be interested in，collect stamps等。而I like Spring Festival better because I can get many red packets and often visit the relatives and friends with my family./ I often do eye exercises and do morning exercises during the break between classes in order to keep healthy.等復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)句式的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。