Question

書面表達

要求：1、按要求寫一篇短文，80字左右；

2、所給提示詞全部用上，包含圖示或提示的全部要點，并發(fā)揮你的想象力(但不要逐句翻譯成英語！)；

3．根據(jù)需要，使用正確的時態(tài)、語態(tài)等，敘事完整，內(nèi)容充實，語言通順，書寫規(guī)范。

4．首句已給出，但不記入總字數(shù)。

李小虎沉迷于電腦游戲中，影響了學(xué)習(xí)。作為他的好朋友，你打算怎么幫他呢？

請用下面所給的提示詞寫一篇短文。

提示詞：give up　concentrate on　be(become)interested in

Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and fell behind others．________

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others．As a good/close friend of his, I must do something to help him．

　　First, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes．So he must give it up．I can play more sports with him after school．Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games．

　　And then I’ll ask him to concentrate more on his study．Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects．I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying．

　　At the same time, I’ll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too．If I try these, I’m sure he will make great progress soon．

　　本題要求兩位教師單獨評分，取平均分作為考生該題的得分。教師評卷時，應(yīng)采用分項分檔次的辦法，先依據(jù)評分標(biāo)準給出每項的檔次分，然后相加。

　　附：評分項目