Question

【題目】書面表達（15分）

一年前Timmy作為一名交換生來到北京參加了“體驗中國”的活動。在學(xué)習(xí)期滿即將回到英國之際，他在校園網(wǎng)的留言板上寫下自己在這里學(xué)習(xí)和生活的情況和感受。請根據(jù)所給提示，幫助Timmy完成這則留言。（60詞左右）

提示：1．與同學(xué)共同生活、相互學(xué)習(xí)，參加學(xué)校俱樂部。

2．游覽名勝古跡(place of interest)；品嘗美食，了解中國文化和歷史。

3．感謝老師和同學(xué)的幫助。

要求：語言規(guī)范、字跡工整；開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Timmy—June 20, 2013, 10∶32

I’ve been here for a year.

Answer 1

【答案】

Timmy—June 20, 2013, 10∶32

I've been here for a year. I enjoyed living here very much. I lived and studied with Chinese students.

After school I often joined some clubs. During the year I visited many places of interest. They are really great. And I enjoyed the delicious food here. Now I've learned more about Chinese history and culture.

Thanks for your help.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達準(zhǔn)確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達準(zhǔn)確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達方式如After school I often joined some clubs. During the year I visited many places of interest. They are really great. And I enjoyed the delicious food here. Now I've learned more about Chinese history and culture.

等等。