Question

【題目】 書面表達。

以How to Keep Healthy為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

How to Keep Healthy

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

How to Keep Healthy

If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food —— more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don’t feel well, you’d better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled water every day. It’s necessary for our health.

We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails or smoke, etc. It’s also very important.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹如何保持健康。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：If we want to ...，We should ...，you’d better....，It’s necessary for ...，We should not ...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了要想保持健康必須有一個好習(xí)慣，接下來具體的介紹好習(xí)慣：早起早睡，多做鍛煉，吃健康的食物，飯前要洗手，最后介紹我們不應(yīng)該吸煙、留長指甲。此處用了want to do sth, get up, go to bed, at least, such as, and so on, had better,throw about等這些詞組,也讓文章增色不少。