Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息以“Learn to express thanks”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。

 

背    景	1.認(rèn)為上中學(xué)時(shí)吃好穿好是應(yīng)該的； 2.走向社會(huì)后沒(méi)有感恩意識(shí)。
學(xué)會(huì)感恩	1.感謝社會(huì)提供良好的教育機(jī)會(huì)； 2.感謝父母供養(yǎng)自己上學(xué)； 3.感謝老師傳授知識(shí)； 4.感謝朋友的支持與鼓勵(lì)。

 

參考詞匯：enter society 進(jìn)入社會(huì)，  sense of thanks 感恩意識(shí)，  behavior 行為

要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括所提供的所有內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯；

2.演講稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名及能夠透露你個(gè)人身份的信息；

3.詞數(shù)：80詞左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning, boys and girls!

    The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”.______________________________________________

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In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.

Thank you for your listening!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

書(shū)面表達(dá)參考范文（一）：

Good morning, boys and girls!

The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.

I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. The society offers us a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.

In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.

Thank you for your listening!

書(shū)面表達(dá)參考范文（二）：

Learn to express thanks

Good morning, boys and girls!

The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find most Middle School students don’t show any sense of “Thanks”. They think that they are certain of eating well and wearing fashionable clothes.

As Middle School students, we should learn to express thanks. We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school. And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us much knowledge. Besides, our friends always give us encouragement and help.

In a word, we are lucky in everything. But we should learn to express thanks. In the future, I should study harder to repay our parents and teachers. I should go to my friends to share their happiness and sadness.

Thank you for your listening!

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于感恩的演講稿。寫(xiě)作中注意將材料按照材料提示進(jìn)行介紹，通過(guò)材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱(chēng)就是第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫(xiě)作中注意使用連接詞，做到語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。由于是演講類(lèi)作文，尤其注意應(yīng)用一些常見(jiàn)句式、短語(yǔ)來(lái)提高我們的表達(dá)水平。