Question

3．養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣，成就好人生，作為一名中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你從日常行為習(xí)慣及學(xué)習(xí)等方面談?wù)勅绾纬蔀橐幻�合格的中學(xué)生，以"How to be a good student"為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
要求：
1、語(yǔ)言正確，行文流暢，書(shū)寫規(guī)范；
2、詞數(shù)：80詞左右；
3、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名或所在地名．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①As a middle school student，I think ②it's important to have good habits，③which can make you to be a good student．作為一個(gè)中學(xué)生，我認(rèn)為有良好的習(xí)慣是很重要的，這可以使你成為一個(gè)好學(xué)生．
①as作為，介詞
②think后跟了賓語(yǔ)從句，引導(dǎo)詞that被省略．it為形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)為動(dòng)詞不定式．
③which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾前面整個(gè)句子
高分句型二：
①In a word，I think②I'm a good student．一句話，我認(rèn)為我是一個(gè)好學(xué)生．
①in a word總之
②think后跟了賓語(yǔ)從句，引導(dǎo)詞that被省略

解答 How to be a good student
As a middle school student，I think it's important to have good habits，which can make you to be a good student．【高分句型一】First，I get up and go to bed on time．I often take part in some meaningful activities with my friends in my spare time．【日常行為習(xí)慣方面】Second，I listen to the teachers carefully in class and finish my homework by myself．I also help other classmates with their lessons，and we often help each other at school Third，I always obey the school rules，respect my teachers and get on well with others．【學(xué)習(xí)等方面】
In a word，I think I'm a good student．【高分句型二】【總結(jié)全文】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開(kāi)作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．