Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）

假設(shè)你是Sandy，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)向校長寫一封推薦June的信。

我想推薦June獲今年的青年獎(jiǎng)（This year's Youth Award ）。她聰明,她很擅長電腦，經(jīng)常從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上獲取信息，她是個(gè)考慮周全的女孩，她能把每件事都計(jì)劃得好好的。她善良且樂于助人，上周，一個(gè)五歲的女孩在超市找不到父母，哭的很傷心，她把幫助她找到了父母。女孩父母親對(duì)她充滿感激。我們都認(rèn)為她應(yīng)該得這個(gè)獎(jiǎng)，希望早日收到回信。

1. 詞數(shù)80左右（開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

2. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行合理拓展；

Dear principle:

I would like to recommend June for This year's Youth Award.___________________________

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Yours faithfully

Sandy

Answer 1

【答案】

I would like to recommend June for this year’s Youth Award. She is very clever. She is good at computer and often searches for information through the Internet. She often comes up with good ideas for class. We like her. She is organized. She can plan everything very well. And she never forgets the things she needs to do.

She is helpful. Last week, a five-year-old girl can’t find her parents, and she was crying in the supermarket. June saw her and took her to the police station . She played with her until her parents found her. The girl’s parents was very thankful to her.

She is also hard-working and careful. For example, she always does extra work after class. She can find out the things the others don’t pay attention to. We all think she should get the award and we are looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely

Sandy

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如She is good at computer and often searches for information through the Internet. She can find out the things the others don’t pay attention to. We all think she should get the award and we are looking forward to hearing from you soon.

等等。