Question

【題目】寫作。（15分）

請(qǐng)你以“My Dream Home”為題來談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想家園�？筛鶕�(jù)下面提示的內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

社區(qū)情況	鄰居很友好，他們有不同的技能，幫助我們解決各種難題。志愿者們很樂意幫忙。
周圍環(huán)境	附近有一個(gè)公園，空氣很新鮮，人們可以在里面慢跑和散步。
房子概況	有兩層，有個(gè)陽臺(tái)，可以向外看到海灘和大海。房子后面有個(gè)花園，和家人一起在花園里玩得很開心。
內(nèi)部設(shè)施	有一個(gè)屬于自己的臥室……（至少寫一句話）

要求：1. 語句通順、語言規(guī)范。2. 書寫工整、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)正確，應(yīng)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

3. 詞數(shù)：70詞左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Dream Home

In my neighborhood ,my neighbors are friendly to each other. They have different kills and they often help us solve all kinds of problems. There is a park near my dream home. We can go for a walk and run slowly in the park. We all like it. There are two floors and a big garden in my house. In the garden , we can plant many flowers. It is very beautiful. There are two bedrooms,one is for my parents ,the other is for me .

I like my dream room very much.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹介紹自己的夢(mèng)想家園。應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇小短文要點(diǎn)全面，并有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，基本沒有語法錯(cuò)誤。