Question

8．臨近畢業(yè)之際，學(xué)校要舉辦一場畢業(yè)生告別晚會(huì)，假如你是九年級一班的l李明，將代表班級在會(huì)上發(fā)言．請結(jié)合內(nèi)容提示，以"My speech at the school leavers'party"為題寫一篇80-100詞的發(fā)言稿．
內(nèi)容提示：
1、How are you feeling while giving the speech？
2、Who do you want to stay thanks to？
3、Why do you want to thank them？
4、Your wishes for the future．
要求：
1、語言通順，要點(diǎn)齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；
2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3、文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
My speech at the school leavers'party
Teachers and classmates，
I'm Li Ming from Class 1，Grade 9．I'm a bit nervous but very proud to speak at the school leavers'party…
That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇材料作文．通過審題了解寫作的主要內(nèi)容：假如你是九年級一班的李明，將代表班級在學(xué)校舉辦的畢業(yè)生告別晚會(huì)上發(fā)言，題目是"My speech at the school leavers'party"，發(fā)言稿中包括四個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容，缺一不可．問題是一篇發(fā)言稿，所以要注意發(fā)言稿的格式；文章側(cè)重于老師等人對于學(xué)生現(xiàn)在造成的影響，要感謝他們，所以主要的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，可以夾雜少量的其他時(shí)態(tài)如一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，對于未來的愿望可以用一般將來時(shí)等；人稱為第一人稱．注意文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱．

解答 One possible version：
My speech at the school leavers'party
Teachers and classmates，
I'm Li Ming from Class 1，Grade 9．I'm a bit nervous but very proud to speak at the school leavers'party．
First，I'd like to thank all our teachers．We have learned a lot from you．You show us your kindness，your patience，and rich knowledge．You're developed our interests，skills and made us grow up happily．You'll always be our role models．
Next，I should thank my classmates．We have become good friends．We've studied together，helped each other and had a lot of fun．Soon we will go to new schools and we may not see each other so often in the future，But I believe our friendship will last forever．
Wish you all success and good luck in the future．
That's all．Thank you．

點(diǎn)評 此為材料作文．要仔細(xì)審題，抓住給出的4個(gè)要點(diǎn)把要表達(dá)的信息條理清楚的表達(dá)出來．要用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、句式和詞語，完整準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)所提示的內(nèi)容，例如文中使用的First，Next等詞．要語言通順，意思連貫，注意書寫工整，盡量避免出現(xiàn)單詞和語法錯(cuò)誤．