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【題目】書面表達(dá)：

時(shí)間飛逝，轉(zhuǎn)眼間同學(xué)們進(jìn)入九年級(jí)已有三個(gè)多月了，在繁忙的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，我們有困惑、淚水；也有進(jìn)步、喜悅。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇題為“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介紹九年級(jí)的學(xué)校生活，并提出希望和建議。注意：要點(diǎn)表達(dá)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)100左右。

學(xué)習(xí)生活	老師	工作認(rèn)真；充滿愛心；……（自由發(fā)揮1-2點(diǎn)）
	學(xué)生	課上：認(rèn)真聽講；尊敬老師
		課后：互相幫助，按時(shí)交作業(yè)
課余生活	因?yàn)樘�多的作業(yè)，沒有足夠的時(shí)間從事業(yè)余愛好.	電視：每周一次或兩次觀看自己最喜歡的節(jié)目。男生喜歡……，因?yàn)椤�…；女生喜歡……，因?yàn)椤��?/span>
		體育運(yùn)動(dòng)：每天鍛煉半小時(shí)，如：……
		音樂：在課間欣賞，大多數(shù)人喜歡聽……覺得它……（自由發(fā)揮1-2點(diǎn)）
愿望	通過努力，每個(gè)學(xué)生能取得更多的進(jìn)步；……（自由發(fā)揮1-2點(diǎn)）。

Our school life in Grade Nine

It is more than two months since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.

At school, _____________________________________________________________________

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Because of too much homework, we don’t have enough time to do our hobbies. Though we are busy with our study, we still live a colourful life. _______________________________

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As a Grade 9 student, I hope___________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

It is more than two months since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.

At school, our teachers work carefully. They all have a heart full of love. Though they are strict, they care about every student. We students listen to the teacher carefully in class. We respect the teachers very much. After class, we help each other and always hand in our homework on time.

Because of too much homework, we don’t have enough time to do our hobbies. Though we are busy with our study, we still live a colourful life. We watch our favourite TV programmes once or twice a week. Many boys like watching sports programmes because they think these programmes are exciting. Many girls like watching documentaries because they can learn a lot about nature, history and real-life events from them. We also do sports for half an hour every day, such as running and playing ball games. What’s more, we enjoy music during the break. Most of us like listening to classical music because it can help us relax.

As a Grade 9 student, I hope we can make more progress in our study through hard work. And I believe that we can enter the ideal high school successfully next year.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹九年級(jí)學(xué)生的校園生活，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如Many boys like watching sports programmes because they think these programmes are exciting. Many girls like watching documentaries because they can learn a lot about nature, history and real-life events from them.等，Because等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。