Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的表格的提示，寫(xiě)一篇題為：“Saving the Earth”的英語(yǔ)短文。
注意：1、詞數(shù)80左右。   2、標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
3、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)見(jiàn)表格。

人類(lèi)的不明智之舉	亂伐樹(shù)木 亂扔垃圾 不加處理排放廢物
導(dǎo)致的問(wèn)題	1、土地沙化 2、河水變臟 3、空氣質(zhì)量差 4、全球氣溫升高
建議	合理化建議至少三條

Saving the Earth
As time goes by, people are making the earth sick.                                     
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                 
                                                                               
                                                                                
                                                                                 
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                 
                                                                               
                                                                                
                                                                                

Answer 1

Saving the Earth
As time goes by, people are making the earth sick. People cut down too many trees and leave rubbish everywhere. Factories let out their waste without doing anything to it. This has caused some serious problems. For example, the land is sandy; the river is dirty; the air is less clean; even the temperature of the earth is rising, and she is shouting for help. What shall we do to save her? My suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories pouring waste into the air or rivers. We have only one earth, we should do everything to protect it, or we will regret.

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以Saving the Earth 為題寫(xiě)一篇作文。短文主要有三部分內(nèi)容，第一部分是人類(lèi)對(duì)環(huán)境的破壞，即表格中的第一部分；第二部分是由于人類(lèi)的破壞而導(dǎo)致的問(wèn)題；第三部分是你自己提出的建議。故這篇作文的結(jié)構(gòu)還是很明星的，寫(xiě)作時(shí)只需按照這三部分內(nèi)容，用正確的英語(yǔ)將其表達(dá)出來(lái)即可。關(guān)于環(huán)保的話(huà)題，在教材中也出現(xiàn)過(guò)，所以學(xué)生們這方面的詞匯和句型的積累還是有的。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)句和段落之間的銜接，使表達(dá)流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，在這篇短文中作者將題目中的要求，表格中的內(nèi)容完整、準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)了出來(lái)。首先作者先寫(xiě)了人們對(duì)環(huán)境的破壞，使用了這樣一句話(huà)As time goes by, people are making the earth sick，人類(lèi)讓地球生病了，非常生動(dòng)。接著作者寫(xiě)了這樣做帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題，F(xiàn)or example, the land is sandy; the river is dirty; the air is less clean; even the temperature of the earth is rising, and she is shouting for help.，同樣用生動(dòng)的語(yǔ)言，擬人的手法來(lái)描寫(xiě)的。最后作者給出了自己的建議，My suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories pouring waste into the air or rivers. We have only one earth, we should do everything to protect it, or we will regret.運(yùn)用句式準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。