Question

學(xué)校的English Club正以My best friend-為題舉行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇征文。

我最好的朋友-James
性別：男      年齡 ：13   籍貫：中國(guó)揚(yáng)州   職業(yè) ：學(xué)生
外貌	高而強(qiáng)壯，看起來很陽光
品質(zhì)	友好，樂于助人
愛好	打籃球，看電影
生活 習(xí)慣	1、早飯吃面包喝牛奶；午飯吃些肉、蔬菜和米飯；晚飯吃得清淡。 2、每周打籃球三次，因?yàn)樗�認(rèn)為------。 3、每月去看電影一次，因?yàn)?-----。

要求：1. 要點(diǎn)完整,表達(dá)清楚,語句通順,意思連貫;
2. 不必逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但不可出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、班級(jí)等;
3. 詞數(shù): 100個(gè)字 左右。
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Answer 1

 My best friend
I have a good friend.He is a boy. His name is James. He is from Yangzhou China. He is also a student.
What is he like? He looks very smart.He is tall and strong.He is very lively.He is friendly to everyone and very glad to help others.
We have the same hobbies,playing basketball and watching movies.We paly basketball three times a week.He think it's good for our health.We go to the cinema once a month.This can make us relax.
In addition,he pay much attention to his diet.Bread and milk is his breakfast and he has some meat, vegetables and rice for lunch. He eat less in the evening.

試題分析：在寫作之前，首先要審好題。此題寫作內(nèi)容已給出，自己可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。所給內(nèi)容基本充實(shí)。所以主要是要把所給的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確無誤地用英文表達(dá)出來并組合成一篇介紹朋友的短文。此類寫作考題要避免逐句翻譯。要用自己的構(gòu)思把所給的內(nèi)容寫出連貫，有層次，完整的一篇文章，這是本題的關(guān)鍵之處�？疾檎Z言的組織。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】例文用了四段來描述“我的朋友”。把所給內(nèi)容系統(tǒng)的歸納成四部分，三方面。第一部分為簡(jiǎn)單介紹，總起全文。第二部分介紹外貌和品質(zhì)。第三部分作為共同點(diǎn)來介紹James的愛好，有共同的愛好才能成為好友。同時(shí)也描寫針對(duì)相同愛好而進(jìn)行的有規(guī)律的活動(dòng)。第四部分講解James是一個(gè)很講究飲食的人，介紹他的飲食習(xí)慣。例文把所給信息從新組合，并用到了一些短語，是文章更有層次感和整體感。