Question

【題目】Writing (作文)

Write a passage of at least 60 words on “ My Change” according to the given situation(以“我變 了”為題，寫一篇不少于 60 詞的短文，標點符號不占格)

你在生活或者學(xué)習(xí)中一定發(fā)生了不少改變，比如生活技能的改變、學(xué)習(xí)方法的改變等，請選取一個方面，結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，談一談你是如何變化了。

（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）

Phrases for reference（以下短語僅供參考）:

used to do/be…

try my best to do…

Answer 1

【答案】My Change

My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be more serious,but now I am outgoing. I used to be overweight , but I am not fat anymore .I used to like watching cartoon every day, but now I like to watch TV play .

The biggest change in my life is that I begin to understand others. When I was a child, I didn’t know why our family had so many rules. I thought that maybe my parents didn’t like me. But now I know they love me and they do that in order to make me a better man. Every time when I come across something I don’t understand. I will put myself in others’ shoes and I will feel better.

【解析】

題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文，要求介紹“我的改變”，根據(jù)提示可知，本文人稱為第一人稱。要求結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷介紹自己如何變化。注意主謂一致，上下文連接。用詞準確、文章連貫性。