Question

19．以 Pocket money is______ for young children為題寫篇小短文，詞數(shù)80-100．步驟與要點(diǎn)如下：
1．確定主題，并在文中說明原因；
2．圍繞主題，進(jìn)行敘述；
3．講述一段與主題有關(guān)的故事或經(jīng)歷．
要求：
1．補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題；
2．字跡工整，內(nèi)容完整連貫，語言準(zhǔn)確規(guī)范；
3．鼓勵(lì)寫出真情實(shí)感，對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分；
4．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不能直接引用原文中的句子；
5．作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)校名和姓名．
Pocketmoneyis expected to be cautious foryoungchildren
Nowadays，middle school students tend to be very free with their pocket money，which has become a difficult problem to solve for schools．
Generally，parents give their children some money every month as their living expenses．However，some students spend less on regular meals and everyday goods to save their pocket money with which they buy snacks，MP4 players，fashionable clothes and so on．What's worse，they spend it on playing computer games or surfing the Internet．Therefore，they don't know how hard it is to earn money．
In order to help the students，we should call on parents monitoring the pocket money．The school should take proper measures to educate the students and make them build up the good value of consuming．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Nowadays，middle school students tend to be very free with their pocket money，which has become a difficult problem to solve for schools現(xiàn)在，中學(xué)生用零花錢往往大手大腳，這已經(jīng)成為學(xué)校面臨的一個(gè)難題．這是由which引導(dǎo)的一個(gè)非限定性的定語從句，修飾前面的整個(gè)句子．
高分句型二：What's worse，they spend it on playing computer games or surfing the Internet更糟糕的是，他們把錢花在玩電腦游戲或上網(wǎng)上；What's worse更糟糕的是；sb．spend some time （in）on（doing） sth．某人花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事．

解答 Pocket money is expected to be cautious for young children
      Nowadays，middle school students tend to be very free with their pocket money，which has become a difficult problem to solve for schools．（高分句型一）（學(xué)生花零用錢存在的問題）
      Generally，parents give their children some money every month as their living expenses．However，some students spend less on regular meals and everyday goods to save their pocket money with which they buy snacks，MP4 players，fashionable clothes and so on．What's worse，they spend it on playing computer games or surfing the Internet．（高分句型二）Therefore，they don't know how hard it is to earn money．（描述學(xué)生花零用錢的不良現(xiàn)象）
      In order to help the students，we should call on parents monitoring the pocket money．The school should take proper measures to educate the students and make them build up the good value of consuming．（呼吁家長(zhǎng)的監(jiān)督和采取的措施）

點(diǎn)評(píng) （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用定語從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動(dòng)詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．