Question

【題目】書面表達

今天你和同學一起去了美術博物館。請寫一篇日記, 描述你們此次活動的內容和你的感受。

要求：

1. 意思連貫. 語句通順. 時態(tài)正確。

2. 60詞左右。

April 9th

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Answer 1

【答案】April 9th

Today it was sunny and warm. I went to the art museum with my classmates. The bus was so fast and it only took us half an hour to get there. The museum was big. There were lots of great paintings in it. I was really interested in them, but the guide told us not to take photos of them. Then the guide told us some stories about the paintings. They were interesting. All in all, it was an exciting day.

【解析】本文屬于話題作文，描述去美術博物館的活動內容以及感受。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如with, so, it takes sb 時間to do sth, lots of, be interested in, take photos, exciting以及all in all等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。