Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是Tom，想推薦李磊獲得今年的優(yōu)秀青年獎（Youth Award）。根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇推薦信。內(nèi)容要點如下：

1、他勤奮好學(xué)，成績優(yōu)異；

2、他擅長數(shù)學(xué)，幫助同學(xué)們解決各種數(shù)學(xué)問題；

3、他樂于助人，他常常……

4、他也很勇敢。上個月把一個老婦人從火中救了出來，自己大腿卻嚴(yán)重?zé)齻��?/span>

注意：

1、短文必須包括所給內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫；

2、第三要點須用1—2句作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù)70左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to recommend Li Lei for this year’s Youth Award.

I think he should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’d like to recommend Li Lei for this year’s Youth Award

Li Lei studies very hard and does well in all the subjects. He is good at maths, so he often helps his classmates with all kinds of maths problems. Li Lei is also helpful. He often gives his seat to the old people on the bus. He is very brave. Last month, he saved an old woman from fire and his legs were badly hurt.

I think he should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Tom

【解析】

試題分析：Tom推薦李磊獲得今年的優(yōu)秀青年獎，所以句子應(yīng)該用第三人稱單數(shù)，敘述他的平時的表現(xiàn)，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，曾經(jīng)做過的事情用一般過去時。

寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：recommend sb for sth為了某事而推薦某人；do well in在某事方面做的好；help sb with sth幫助某人做某事；give sth to sb給某人某物；look forward to doing盼望某人做某事。用了so及and連詞，that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。增加了文章的亮點。