Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

青少年很容易因?yàn)閷W(xué)習(xí)和生活上的事情與父母發(fā)生爭(zhēng)執(zhí)。上周Tom就因?yàn)楦改覆煌�意他使用手機(jī)一事和父母大吵了一架。那么青少年是否應(yīng)該使用手機(jī)?大家各執(zhí)一詞。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的信息，寫一篇短文，說(shuō)明大家的不同看法，并請(qǐng)談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)及理由。不要忘了給Tom兩條建議，緩和他和父母的關(guān)系。要求：文章包含表中所有信息，要有恰當(dāng)?shù)拈_(kāi)頭，結(jié)尾和過(guò)渡語(yǔ)，使文章更具可讀性。字?jǐn)?shù)：100—120。保持書(shū)面整潔。 ·

Should use mobile phone	Shouldn’t use mobile phone	Your opinion and advice
1. call parents if necessary	1. not good for health	…
2. listen to music	2. a waste of time

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Answer 1

【答案】

The teenagers argue with their parents easily because of learning and living things .Last week，Tom argued with his parents about the mobile phones.Some pepole think teenagers should use mobile phone，because they think teenagers can call their parents if necessary.And they can listen to music.Some pepole don’t think teenagers should use mobile phones，they think mibile phones are not good for their health.And using mobile phones is a waste of time.I hold the view that young people can use a mobile phone， because it can help us to learn， and also listen to music tohave a relax.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文叫小作者介紹青少年們是不是應(yīng)該用手機(jī)的觀點(diǎn)。在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如I hold the view that young people can use a mobile phone， because it can help us to learn， and also listen to music tohave a relax.等等。