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【題目】B．寫作題本學(xué)期，學(xué)生會活動的主題是"人人為貧困孩子獻(xiàn)愛心"，請你以學(xué)生會主席的名義寫一份倡議書，內(nèi)容要點如下：
1），許多孩子因貧困而上不起學(xué)
2），他們沒有足夠的學(xué)習(xí)用品和衣物
3），每個孩子都應(yīng)該有上學(xué)的權(quán)利（right）
4），盡快做些事去幫助他們很有必要，列舉具體幫助措施1……2……（至少兩點）
5），眾人拾柴火焰高。只要我們伸出援助之手，他們就會擁有獲得知識的機(jī)會。
注意：1），文章開頭，結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)
2），作文應(yīng)包含所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮
3）, 100詞左右
Dear all,
In some parts of our country, many children are out of school.

Thanks a lot for your help.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear all,

In some parts of our country, many children are out of school. They are too poor to go to school. They don't have enough clothes and study materials. As a matter of fact, every child has his right to go to school. They should have a chace to study, which can help them learn a lot of knowledges. So, It's necessary for us to do something to give them a hand. For example, we can contribute some books, some study materials and some clothes as a gift for them. We can also endow some money so that they can buy something important for their study, such as desks and chairs. When everybody adds fuel, the flames rise high. As long as we lend a helping hand, they will have the chance to acquire knowledge.
Thanks a lot for your help.

【解析】這是一篇提綱作文，首先第一句可以用too...to...太......而導(dǎo)致不能......來寫；第二句中沒有足夠的可譯為“not enough”；第三句可以用主+謂+賓的形式來寫，主語為“every child”，謂語為“have”，賓語為“right to go to school”；第四句可以用“It's necessary to do something”句型來寫，然后自己可以具體列幾個例子來說明，舉例子可用“For example”來寫，也可用“such as”或“for instance”來寫；第五句中應(yīng)用了諺語，這句諺語可以用“When everybody adds fuel, the flames rise high.”來表示；后面這句可以用if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句來寫。