Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)(共l0分)。

健康對(duì)于每一個(gè)人來(lái)說(shuō)都是很重要的 (very important)。下面是 “保持健康的方法”的幾條好建議。請(qǐng)你跟具下表的內(nèi)容提示，以“The way to keep healthy ”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文。

三要：1.要多吃水果和蔬菜，多喝開(kāi)水（fruit, vegetables , warm water）

2.要多運(yùn)動(dòng) （do exercise）

3.晚上早睡 （go to bed early）

三不要：

1.不要抽煙，喝酒（smoke ,drink ）

2.不要吃太多的糖 ( sugar )

3.工作或?qū)W習(xí)不要太勞累 (too tired)

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Answer 1

【答案】

The way to Keep Healthy

Health is very important for everybody.Then what can we do to keep healthy? You can try the following tips:

First,you should have healthy eating habits.You should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much candies. It’s bad for you.

Second,you can do exercises.Sports can make you stronger and healthier.You can play baketball with your friends when you are free.You can go to the mouuntains with your family.

Third,You should go to bed early.It’s good for your health.

Stay away from smoking and drinking. Smoking and drinking are too bad for men .They can cause terrible illness.

At last,you don’t work or study for long time.You will be tired.It is bad for your health.

If you do these things ,I believe you can be a healthy man.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如First,you should have healthy eating habits.You should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much candies. Stay away from smoking and drinking. Smoking and drinking are too bad for men .They can cause terrible illness.等等。