Question

【題目】 假如你叫張華，你的英國(guó)好友Tom想了解去年暑假你到廈門(mén)旅行的經(jīng)歷和感受。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示，用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封e-mail, 詞數(shù)70左右。

提示詞匯：鼓浪嶼 Gulangyu；南普陀寺 Nanputuo Temple；海鮮seafood

要求：

1. 必須包含所有提示信息并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，e-mail的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；

3. 請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名。

Dear Tom,

You said you wanted to know about my trip to Xiamen. I am very glad to tell you about it.

Last summer holiday,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope to go there again one day.

Yours,

Zhang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear Tom,

You said you wanted to know about my trip to Xiamen. I am very glad to tell you about it.

Last summer holiday, I went to Xiamen with my parents. Xiamen is a beautiful city. The weather there is very good. The air is always fresh. We went there by train and stayed there for three days. We visited many places of interest, such as Gulangyu, Nanputuo Temple and so on. We took many photos. And we also enjoyed some delicious seafood. In a word, we had a good time in Xiamen.

I hope to go there again one day.

Yours,

Zhang Hua

【解析】

1.題干解讀：該題目是書(shū)信作文，也是話題作文，話題是“談?wù)撊ツ晔罴倌愕綇B門(mén)旅行的經(jīng)歷和感受。”。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)。仔細(xì)閱讀提示要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，列出提綱。作文必須包含所有提示信息并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。注意檢查，寫(xiě)完以后，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。