Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是Tom，請根據(jù)下表所提示的內(nèi)容，寫一封推薦信，推薦你的同學(xué)Helen獲取今年的最佳學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)。

學(xué)習(xí)	1. 各門功課成績好，對令人驚奇的事情了解很多。 2. 最喜歡英語，每天花很多時(shí)間練習(xí)說英語。
愛好	1. 擅長繪畫, 拉小提琴。 2. 養(yǎng)了一只貓，很懶，喜歡睡在她腿上。
品德	1. 樂于助人，經(jīng)常幫助同學(xué)復(fù)習(xí)功課。 2. 有禮貌，在公共汽車上 …… 3. 熱心的，……

要求： 1.條理清楚，語意連貫。2.緊扣主題，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.書寫規(guī)范，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確。正文80字左右。信的開頭稱呼和結(jié)尾落款已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。

Dear Sir,

I am writing to recommend Helen for this year’s Best Student Award.

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I think Helen has all the qualities to get the award.

Yours

Tom

注意：所有答案必須寫在答題紙上。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I am writing to recommend Helen for this year’s Best Student Award.

Helen is good at all her subjects and it's amazing that she knows so much. Her favorite subject is English. She spends lots of time practice speaking English every day. She draws well and she does well in playing the violin. She keeps a pet cat. It is very lazy and it likes sleeping on her leg. Helen is ready to help others and she often helps her classmates with their subjects. She is so polite that she often offers her seat to others on the bus. She is very kind and we all love her.

I think Helen has all the qualities to get the award.

Yours

Tom

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求寫一封信推薦同學(xué)獲得今年的最佳學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)。給出的材料比較全面，首先要做的是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。短文主要用第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行表達(dá)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本范文內(nèi)容包含了提綱要求的所有要點(diǎn)，并作了適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。句子結(jié)構(gòu)正確，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。短文緊扣主題，重點(diǎn)空出，中心突出。be good at, so much, lots of, practice doing, do well in, be ready to等等短語及句型結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確使用，使得本文生動(dòng)具體，為本段增色不少。