Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

和諧，雨潤(rùn)心田；文明，風(fēng)暖校園。請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面所提供的漫畫和提示詞，以“Doing Our Part”(從我們做起)為題寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容必須包括：

1．簡(jiǎn)單描述圖中人物行為，并簡(jiǎn)述你的看法；

2．發(fā)表你的校園文明倡議。

提示詞：talk loudly；drop litter；save food；get along well with

要求：1.條理清楚，有表明自己觀點(diǎn)的句子；可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2．文中不能出現(xiàn)校名、人名、地名等真實(shí)信息。

3．80—100詞。文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Doing Our Part

From the picture, we can see that the boy_______________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Doing Our Part

From the picture, we can see that the boy is dropping litter outside the dustbin. The ground looks dirty. I think what he does is wrong.

As middle school students, it is our duty to behave well and try to make the school more beautiful. We shouldn't talk loudly in public. Dropping litter is not allowed in or out of school. Never waste food while eating in the dining room. Also we are supposed to get along well with classmates. It's very important to be polite to teachers.

In a word, if we can do our part, we can make a difference to the school.

【解析】

這是一篇看圖作文，根據(jù)所提供的漫畫和提示詞，以“Doing Our Part”(從我們做起)為題寫一篇短文。介紹一下圖中人物行為并簡(jiǎn)述你的看法和發(fā)表你的校園文明倡議。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意短文中必須包含提示詞上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

I think what he does is wrong. 我認(rèn)為他的所作所為是錯(cuò)誤的。what he does is wrong.做think的賓語(yǔ)。

【高分句型二】

it is our duty to behave well and try to make the school more beautiful. 表現(xiàn)良好，努力使學(xué)校更加美麗是我們的責(zé)任。句型：It is our duty to do sth. 做某事是我們的責(zé)任。

【高分句型三】

In a word, if we can do our part, we can make a difference to the school. 總而言之，如果我們能盡力而為，我們就能改變學(xué)校。if we can do our part是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。