Question

【題目】世界上最偉大的是母親，母親為我們付出了很多。結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷。以“I love my mother”為題，寫一篇英文短文，以表達(dá)對(duì)母親的感激之情。

提示：1.some information about your mother 2.an experience about how your mother took care of you 3.your love to your mother

要求：1.參考提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的信息（姓名，校名和地名等）。4.詞數(shù)，不少于70詞。

Answer 1

【答案】I Love My mother
In my eyes, my mother is the most beautiful woman in the world. She has typical Asian features: yellow skin and black hair, but what catches the attention of people is her eyes. Her eyes are as clear and bright as the night sky, and whenever she smiles, they would glow up and shine like a million twinkling stars. Nobody could possibly stay angry or depressed under such a smile, and even a heart of stone would crumble under her shine.
She is also the gentlest person alive. Once, when I scraped my knee by accident, she flew like a wind to my side, and took out a piece of alcohol swab to clean the cut. It stung like I was being bit by a bee, so she started blowing the red rash on my knee. The light gust of wind coming out of her mouth soothed the pain, and suddenly I had the courage to stand up again. I looked up into her eyes, eyes filled with concentration and gentleness.
I love my mother for all that she has given me,and always will

【解析】

本文屬于話題作文，要表達(dá)對(duì)母親的感激之情。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如最高級(jí)the most beautiful，catch the attention，as+原級(jí)+as，the courage to，fill with以及stand up。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。