Question

【題目】書面表達。 (15分)

以“My friend Tom”為題，寫一篇短文，不少于60個詞。請充分發(fā)揮你的想象力，使短文的語言流暢.連貫。

1. 湯姆是一個好學(xué)生。他13歲，高而瘦并戴著眼鏡的男孩子。他樂意助人，昨天他幫助了邁克數(shù)學(xué)。

2. 湯姆勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，各門功課都好。 他數(shù)學(xué)和英語學(xué)得最好。他每天早晨讀英語和語文。

3. 他很健康，他經(jīng)常吃健康食品并一周鍛煉三次。他也喜歡打籃球和游泳。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend is Tom. He is a good student. He’s 13 years old. He is both tall and thin. He usually wears small and round glasses. He is always ready to help others. Yesterday he helped Mike to learn English. Tom is a hard-working boy, he does well in all his subjects, especially English and math. He reads English and Chinese every morning. Tom is very healthy, he often eats healthy food and exercises three times a week. And he also likes playing basketball and swimming.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求以My friend Tom為題，根據(jù)所給要點寫一篇60詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點可知，本文主要以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)書寫，只有一個一般過去時態(tài)的句子。可以用第三人稱。要注意把每一個要點都表達出來，不要遺漏任何一個，并且要圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

寫作亮點：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了自己的朋友Tom，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點全面。一個一般過去時態(tài)的句子把握的也比較準(zhǔn)確。該文中以下幾個句子用得很好。He is always ready to help others. Tom is a hard-working boy, he does well in all his subjects, especially English and math.