Question

13．同學(xué)們，你們正處于初三的沖刺階段，時(shí)間對(duì)每個(gè)人來(lái)說(shuō)都是寶貴的，但有些同學(xué)仍不知道珍惜，經(jīng)常看電視，上網(wǎng)，玩手機(jī)…請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示和要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．
提示：1．What things do students waste  time doing？
2．What's the importance of saving time？
3．How can we save time？
要求：短文包括所有提示，詞數(shù)60-80．
How to save time
We have ever heard of"Time is money．Time is life．"

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)剬?duì)于初三的學(xué)生時(shí)間重要性和怎樣節(jié)約時(shí)間．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1學(xué)生們浪費(fèi)時(shí)間的行為
2時(shí)間的重要性
3怎樣節(jié)約時(shí)間
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
waste time（in） doing sth．浪費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事
spend+時(shí)間+doing sth花時(shí)間做某事
and so on 等等
make a plan制定計(jì)劃
make use of 利用
make progress取得進(jìn)步
【高分句型】
1．It's neesessary for us to save our valuable time．
It's+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎樣的，it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語(yǔ)．
2．First，we should ①listen to our teachers carefully in class ②so that we can save more time ③to lean others after class．
①listen to sb 聽(tīng)某人的話
②so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句．
③動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)，表目的．
3．①If we ②make good use of time，we ③are sure to ④make great progress．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句．
②make good use of 充分利用
③be sure to do sth確信做某事
④make progress取得進(jìn)步

解答 How to save time
We have ever heard of Time is money．Time is life．But we can see some students waste time doing something useles s everywhere．They spend much time playing computer games，chatting online，watching TV and so on．（學(xué)生們浪費(fèi)時(shí)間的行為）
It's neesessary for us to save our valuable time．【高分句型】Time is very important to everyone．we don't save time，we can't improve our study．（時(shí)間的重要性）
But how can we save time．First，we should listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to lean others after class．【高分句型】Second，we can make a plan to study at home．In this way，we can learn more with less time．If we make good use of time，we are sure to make great progress．【高分句型】（怎樣節(jié)約時(shí)間）

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