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4．注意：（1）作文詞數(shù)不少于80詞（標(biāo)題和作文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）：
（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實姓名、校名和老師名，否則不給分．
目前中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重，壓力大．而豐富多彩的業(yè)余生活，有利于開拓視野，調(diào)節(jié)身心，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率．請以"My Spare Time"為題寫一篇作文，談?wù)勀愕臉I(yè)余生活，如看書、看電視、玩電腦、做運動、做家務(wù)等．
My Spare Time
I am a middle school student．Though I'm busy with my lessons，my spare time is still colorful．
After school I usually play sports．I like basketball and football very much．Sportshelp me to keep healthy and study better．I often do some reading in the evening．I think books are our best friends．They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school．So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time．Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet．I find it's a good way to relax myself．At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world．At the weekends I often help my parents with the housework．I clean the house，wash clothes and learn to cook．During the summer or winter vacation，I have enough time to do things like volunteering．I help those people who are in need．It's a good experience for me．I enjoy myself in my spare time．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇以My Spare Time為題目的提綱作文，主要圍繞業(yè)余生活展開寫作，寫作要點包括：
1．業(yè)余生活豐富多彩，總起全文．
2．業(yè)余時間喜歡做什么？如何合理安排？①課后：做運動、看書、看電視、玩電腦．（有利于開拓視野，調(diào)節(jié)身心，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率．）②周末：做家務(wù)（幫助父母，鍛煉自己）③假期：參加社會活動等．（積累經(jīng)驗）；
3．總結(jié)全文；
作文中要以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．因為是"我的業(yè)余時間"，所以人稱應(yīng)該用第一人稱I；作文要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)要正確； 上下文要連貫以及語言要得體．還要注意拼寫和標(biāo)點符號．
所用到的重點詞匯及重點短語和句子有：
be busy with，after school，play sports，keep healthy，do some reading，in the evening，at school，watch TV，relax oneself，at the same time，open up，help with，in need，enjoy oneself，in my spare time，have time to do sth等．
【高分句型】
1．Sports help me to keep healthy and study better．本句考查了help的用法：help sb do sth幫助某人做某事，后面跟動詞原形；keep在這里是保持，保存的意思，后面可以跟形容詞表示使某某處于某種狀態(tài)，keep healthy保持健康．
2．They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school．本句中考查give的用法：give sb sth給某人某物，后面跟的是雙賓語；that we can't learn at school在這里作定語從句修飾名詞 knowledge．
3．I find it's a good way to relax myself（高分句型）．在這里find后面的成分是賓語從句，在賓語從句中it作形式主語，而后面to引導(dǎo)的不定式形式作真正的主語．

解答 My Spare Time
I am a middle school student．Though I'm busy with my lessons，my spare time is still colorful．（總起）
After school I usually play sports．I like basketball and football very much．Sports help me to keep healthy and study better．（高分句型）I often do some reading in the evening．I think books are our best friends．They give us much knowledge that we can't learn at school．（高分句型）So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time．Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet．I find it's a good way to relax myself（高分句型）．At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world．At the weekends I often help my parents with the housework．I clean the house，wash clothes and learn to cook．During the summer or winter vacation，I have enough time to do things like volunteering．I help those people who are in need．It's a good experience for me．（分條列舉業(yè)余生活）
I enjoy myself in my spare time．（總結(jié)全文）

點評 解答這種題目時，我們應(yīng)該仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點． 要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫． 根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣． 在平常的學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，讓文章更出彩．