【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

介紹我的家鄉(xiāng):

1. 我的家鄉(xiāng)陽(yáng)山鎮(zhèn),是一個(gè)非常安靜又美麗的小鎮(zhèn),這兒的空氣清新。

2. 在這里有許多事情可以做。可以……

3. 能住在這樣一個(gè)鎮(zhèn)上,真是幸運(yùn)的。

注:1. 第二個(gè)要點(diǎn)要求用2-3句話發(fā)揮合理的想象。

全文字?jǐn)?shù)在70詞左右,開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

I live in Yangshan Town.____________________________________________________________________

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【答案】

My hometown

I live in Yangshan Town. It is a quiet and beautiful town. The air here is very fresh because there are many trees in and around it. You can do many things here. For example, you can go to the park to have some sports, sing or dance. You can also go boating because there is a lake in the park. It is very interesting. People here are very friendly. They are always ready to help others. It is lucky to live in such town.

【解析】

試題分析:這篇作文要求我們介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng),題目中已經(jīng)列出了主要的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容,但是非常的不完整,大部分的信息是需要我們自己發(fā)揮想象,補(bǔ)充完整的。因此我們要合理安排文章的內(nèi)容,要積極向上,符合全文的中心思想。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),要特別注意每句話中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化和主謂一致等。不要使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)句子,注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。寫(xiě)作時(shí),還要注意語(yǔ)句的銜接,注意使用一些連詞。將我們平時(shí)積累的短語(yǔ)和句型用上,使文意連貫、流暢。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn):這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。短文里作者按照題目的要求,介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)-陽(yáng)山鎮(zhèn)。短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾意思完整,中心介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng),題目中沒(méi)有這一部分的內(nèi)容,作者的寫(xiě)作和合理,整體上很有統(tǒng)一性。短文里的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱正確,語(yǔ)言和語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。另外,作文里還使用了一些較好的連詞和句型,如The air here is very fresh because there are many trees in and around it、For example, you can go to the park to have some sports, sing or dance、People here are very friendly. They are always ready to help others. 、It is lucky to live in such town等。

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