Question

【題目】在“讓夢想照進(jìn)現(xiàn)實(shí)”的主題班會(huì)上，同學(xué)們暢談了自己在初中的變化及種種經(jīng)歷。李浩也講述了自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷。假如你是李浩，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語寫出李浩的發(fā)言稿。

要點(diǎn)如下：

1.以前性格內(nèi)向，對英語沒什么興趣，上課很少舉手發(fā)言。

2.英語考試常不及格，曾經(jīng)很沮喪，想放棄英語。

3.同學(xué)們及時(shí)伸出援手，自己開始認(rèn)真對待英語學(xué)習(xí)。

4.兩年來，英語水平有較大的提高。

5.夢想將來去說英語的國家深造。

6.自己的一些感想。（一兩點(diǎn)）

注意：

詞數(shù)60—80，文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：

1.frustrated adj.沮喪的 2.seldom adv. 很少，不常 3.put up 舉起

Dear friends,

I’m very glad to talk about my English study here

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

I’m very glad to talk about my English study here. My name is Li Jie. I used to be an extremely shy and introverted girl and was not interested in English. I seldom raised my hand in class. As a result, I often failed in English exams. I was so depressed that I wanted to give up my English. It's you, my classmates, who helped me in time. So I began to take English learning seriously.

Over the past two years, I think my English has improved a lot. I dreamed to study in an English-speaking country and I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful and friendly country. I think my English will make great progress there.

Thank you.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be glad to do，talk about，used to be，be interested in，as a result，at the party，give up，dream to do等。文中I was so depressed that I wanted to give up my English./It's you, my classmates, who helped me in time./I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful and friendly country./I think my English will make great progress there.等多種從句結(jié)構(gòu)的綜合運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。