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12．Carry on till tomorrow （堅(jiān)持到明天）是英國(guó)Badfinger樂隊(duì)寫的一首勵(lì)志歌曲，請(qǐng)以"Carry on till tomorrow"為題寫一篇短文．
要求：
1．根據(jù)歌詞和實(shí)際情況回答問題，答案或可多選，亦可自擬．
2．語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范．
3．詞數(shù)100左右．文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
4．文中不得出現(xiàn)考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名．
Carry on till tomorrow
In younger days，I told myself my life would be my own
And I'd leave the place where sunshine never shone
For my life's too short for waiting when I see the rising sun
Then I know again that I must carry on
Carry on till tomorrow，there's no reason to look back
Carry on，carry on，carry on
…

Read the questionnaire below and put a tick（√） in the box next to the ones you choose． 1．Which English idiom can you learn from the song？ □Where there is a will，there is a way．有志者事竟成 □Do nothing by halves．凡事不可半途而廢 □Never say die．堅(jiān)持到底 □Others． 2．What kind of person should you be according to the song？ □Patient．□Brave．□Hard-working．□Others． 3．How often do you have problems in your daily life？ □Always．□Often．□Sometimes．□Others． 4．What's your attitude（態(tài)度） to these problems？ □Face them bravely and take action to solve them． □Never give up easily no matter what happens． □Try to overcome（克服） any problem you may face． □Others．

Carry on till tomorrow
Have you ever heard of the song called Carry on till tomorrow？     ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"Carry on till tomorrow"為題談?wù)勀銓?duì)這首勵(lì)志歌曲的感想．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．從這首歌你能學(xué)到哪句英語諺語？
2．依據(jù)這首歌你應(yīng)該是哪種人？
3．日常生活中多久會(huì)有一次麻煩？
4．對(duì)這些問題的態(tài)度是什么？
歌詞大意：在年輕的日子里，我告訴自己我將有屬于自己的生活；而且我要離開這陽光照不到的地方，我的生命沒有時(shí)間等待，當(dāng)我看見升起的太陽那時(shí)，它又一次告訴我必須堅(jiān)持下去，堅(jiān)持到明天，沒有理由再回想，堅(jiān)持到明天…
問題大意：1．從這首歌你能學(xué)到哪句英語諺語：有志者事竟成；凡事不可半途而廢；堅(jiān)持到底；其他
          2．依據(jù)這首歌你應(yīng)該是哪種人？有耐心的；勇敢的；努力的；其他
          3．日常生活中多久會(huì)有一次麻煩？總是，經(jīng)常，有時(shí)候，其他
          4．對(duì)這些問題的態(tài)度是什么？勇敢面對(duì)去解決；不輕易放棄；盡力克服所有困難；其他

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
remind sb of 讓某人想起
encourage sb to do sth 鼓勵(lì)某人去做某事
deal with 處理
take action to do sth 采取行動(dòng)做某事
give up 放棄
forget to do sth 忘了去做某事
【高分句型】
1．Sometimes①it's really difficult for us to ②deal with them by ourselves．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語．
②deal with 處理
2①．However，we ②have no choice but to face them bravely and ③take action to solve them．
①however 然而，表轉(zhuǎn)折
②have no choice but to do sth 除了做…沒別的選擇
③take action to do sth 采取行動(dòng)做某事

解答 Carry on till tomorrow
Have you ever heard of the song called Carry on till tomorrow？It was sung by Badfingers．The song reminds me of the English idiom do nothing by halves．（學(xué)到哪句英語諺語）It encourages us to be hard-working when we face difficulties．I agree．（你應(yīng)該是哪種人）
In our daily life we may often have different kinds of problems．（日常生活中多久會(huì)有一次麻煩）Sometimes it's really difficult for us to deal with them by ourselves．【高分句型】However，we have no choice but to face them bravely and take action to solve them．【高分句型】And never give up easily no matter what happens．If we cannot work out them by ourselves，don't forget to ask others for help．I'm sure we can overcome any problem we may face．（對(duì)這些問題的態(tài)度是什么）
Carry on till tomorrow．We must carry on!

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