分析 根據(jù)這篇文章的要求"When my friend is sad,I will…"(1)故要用第一人稱來寫,同時(shí)要注意寫作的對象是我的朋友;(2)結(jié)合文章的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí);(3)在寫作內(nèi)容上要緊扣主題:a.什么使我的朋友難過?; b.我為我朋友所做的事情?; c.我朋友的感覺 (4)還需注意運(yùn)用高級短語和高級句型,如:only+介詞短語,注意倒裝;與friend相關(guān)的friendship等詞匯及諺語的運(yùn)用:a friend in need is a friend indeed.; I am deeply convinced that 這樣容易得高分的句子.
解答 參考答案:(1)As a saying goes,a friend in need is a friend indeed.(2)Friendship is like a stream in valley,a gift in my life and a lighthouse into heaven.Therefore,when my friend is sad,I will give her comforts and encouragements,otherwise (3)friendship will be as same as cold winters without sunshine and sailing ships without compasses.I will help her get rid of difficulties and sorrows,(4) even if ups and downs are always inevitable.I will share happiness and joys with her,for(5) only in this way can she finally burst into laughter.In brief,(6) I'm deeply convinced that by doing so,friends shall never be sad again.
點(diǎn)評 精彩亮點(diǎn)分析:
亮點(diǎn)一,首句使用諺語,"患難之間見真情"引入話題.
亮點(diǎn)二,使用修辭表述對友誼的理解.
亮點(diǎn)三,繼續(xù)使用修辭,"否則友誼就像沒有陽光的寒冬,沒有指南針的航船"
亮點(diǎn)四,請學(xué)會(huì)使用如何表達(dá)"人生中總會(huì)有起伏".
亮點(diǎn)五,only+介詞短語,注意倒裝.
亮點(diǎn)六,I am deeply convinced that 我深深的相信
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