Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

俗話說“新年新氣象”你是否為新的一年制定了你的新年計(jì)劃?以下是你的好友Sally的新年計(jì)劃。文章必須包含表格內(nèi)所有內(nèi)容，并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要求語法正確，語言流暢，語意通順， 書寫工整。

取得更好成績	每天按時(shí)完成作業(yè)；多看書，了解不同國家的文化
保持健康	多鍛煉，多吃健康食品，少吃垃圾食品
提升自我	培養(yǎng)一個愛好，比如畫畫彈鋼琴。
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注意：文章開頭已寫出，可供參考，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；2.詞數(shù)：60-80左右。

Sally is my best friend. New Year is coming, she’s made some resolutions.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Sally is my best friend. New Year is coming, she’s made some resolutions. She is going to get good grade. She will work hard at my subjects, such as English, Chinese and so on. She will do her homework on time everyday. She will read more books and know about different country culture. She will do sports every day and eat more healthy food but less junk food to keep healthy. She wants to improve herself. She is going to have a hobby, like drawing, playing the piano and so on. She has confidence in herself. She wants to be a very good student next year.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。主要寫Sally的新年計(jì)劃。全文主要用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第三人稱。文章必須包含表格內(nèi)所有內(nèi)容，要求語法正確，語言流暢，語意通順， 書寫工整。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如do sports ，work hard at，such as，and so on，be proud of，help with，have confidence in等短語，不定式做賓語 to improve these subjects；文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。