Question

13．假如你是Alice，你的網(wǎng)友林濤想了解你的學(xué)校和你的情況．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的信息，給林濤發(fā)一封電子郵件，告訴他有關(guān)你和你的學(xué)校的情況．
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名字	Alice
長(zhǎng)相	高而苗條，大眼睛，黑頭發(fā)
學(xué)校 資料	學(xué)校大而漂亮，有 1個(gè)圖書(shū)館，…
	教室干凈，…
	課8點(diǎn)鐘開(kāi)始，…，我們星期六星期日不上課．
	家離學(xué)校遠(yuǎn)，坐車(chē)上學(xué)要20分鐘
	對(duì)學(xué)校生活的感想．（至少一點(diǎn)）

要求：
1包括信息中提及的所有內(nèi)容，語(yǔ)句通順，條理清楚．
2字?jǐn)?shù)100左右，可適當(dāng)加以發(fā)揮．
Dear Lin Tao，
I'm a student of No.4Middle School now．I am tall and slim．I have two big eyes and black hair．Our school is very big and beaetiful．There is alibrary in front of the classroom．We can read books with our classmates there．Our classes begin at 8：00 from Monday to Friday，we have no classes on Saturday and Sunday．There are about 200 teachers in our school．They are all nice to us．I live far from our scool．I often go to scool by bus．It takes metwenty minutes to get to school．
We have a good time at school every day．I think we should work hard in such a beautiful school．
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             Yours Alice!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There is a library in front of the classroom．教室前面有一個(gè)圖書(shū)館．這是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
I think we should work hard in such a beautiful school．我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該在這樣一所美麗的學(xué)校里努力學(xué)習(xí)．這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，I think 是主句，后面的是賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Dear Lin Tao，
I'm a student of No.4Middle School now．I am tall and slim．I have two big eyes and black hair．【要點(diǎn)一，介紹自己的情況】Our school is very big and beaetiful．There is a library in front of the classroom．【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】We can read books with our classmates there．Our classes begin at 8：00 from Monday to Friday，we have no classes on Saturday and Sunday．There are about 200 teachers in our school．They are all nice to us．I  live far from our scool．I often go to scool by bus．It takes me twenty minutes to get to school．【要點(diǎn)二，介紹學(xué)校的情況】
We have a good time at school every day．I think we should work hard in such a beautiful school．【高分句型二，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】．【要點(diǎn)三，對(duì)學(xué)校生活的感想】
Yours，
Alice．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．