Question

【題目】Writing (作文)

Write at least 60 words about the topic “Less Pressure makes Life Better”(以“少點壓力使生活更美好”為題， 寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)

提示：面對中考，初三學(xué)生的壓力很大。請就此問題談?wù)勀愕目捶ɑ蜃龇ā?/span>

內(nèi)容可包括：

普遍存在的壓力：同學(xué)關(guān)系；考試

你過去的壓力：父母的期望；學(xué)習(xí)

你成功緩解壓力的方法及效果：.......

Phrases for reference (以下短語僅供參考) ：

get on well with…. under pressure

worry about feel less stressed

（注：文中不得出現(xiàn)具體人名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分）

Answer 1

【答案】

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.

Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。同時針對個人的真實情況與短文的要求進行恰當(dāng)?shù)氖潞�，更能加強作品的可讀性。

寫作亮點：本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；應(yīng)用了較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚，沒有或基本沒有語言錯誤；書寫工整；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。