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【題目】書面表達

隨著“爸爸去哪兒?”等綜藝節(jié)目的播出，人們越來越意識到爸爸對孩子成長的重要作用。根據近期你校對本校學生的調查，統(tǒng)計出孩子心目中好爸爸的三大優(yōu)秀品質。請你根據下列表格中的內容，以“What makes a good father?”為題，用英文寫一篇短文。

好爸爸的品質	百分比	理 由
1. 多花時間陪孩子	52%	感受到父愛。
2. 以身作則	27%	為孩子樹立表率，教會他們誠實、勇敢。
3. 經常贊美孩子	14%	給孩子的一個微笑也是對孩子的贊賞。
請給出2條你認為好爸爸應具有的其他品質，并加以說明。

【寫作要求】

1. 對所給要點進行陳述，適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯；

2. 詞數90左右。開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數；

3. 作文中不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名。

What makes a good father?

With the hot Chinese reality show “Where Are We Going, Dad?” broadcast, people realize that fathers play an important role in the growth of their children. From the recent survey of our students, we have found that there are three most important qualities that a good father should have.

Answer 1

【答案】

With the hot Chinese reality show “Where Are We Going, Dad?” broadcast, people realize that fathers play an important role in the growth of their children. From the recent survey of our students, we have found that there are three most important qualities that a good father should have. 52% of the students think a good father should spend more time with his children. In this way they’ll feel their father’s love. 27% of the students believe a good father is a good example. He can teach his children to be honest and braver. 14% of the students think a good father should often praise his children because his smiles also suggest his praise.

In my opinion, a good father is also a patient teacher. A good father will listen to his children and give them suggestions if necessary.

【解析】

試題分析：本文應可以用第三人稱，一般將來時態(tài)和一般現在時態(tài)。作者靈活采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：本文敘述條理清晰，行文流暢。語言豐富，句式多樣；如：spend...with..., teach sb. to do sth., in one’s opinion等；使用了賓語從句，原因狀語從句，條件狀語從句等句型。發(fā)揮恰當，效果不錯。