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12．根據(jù)中文提示和英文書信內(nèi)容，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其字?jǐn)?shù)不計入所完成的回信內(nèi)． 請不要寫出你的姓名和學(xué)校．
假設(shè)你叫楊洋．是加拿大中學(xué)生Paula的筆友，下面是你收到的她的電子郵件．請你根據(jù)她來信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信．針對她的問題，談?wù)勀愕目捶�，同時提出一些幫助她解決問題的建議．Dear Yang Yang，
I'm having troubles these days．It's difficult for me to get down to work，I can't concentrate on studying．At home I spend most of my time playing computer games instead of doing my homework．I go to bed very late，so I feel very tired in class．Sometimes I want to listen to the teachers but I can't stop thinking about the games I played at home．As a result，I can hardly understand the teacher now．I'm afraid I can't pass the final exam．What should I do？Can you help me with the problem？
Yours，
                                                 Paula

   

Dear Paula，
    I'm sorry to hear you are in trouble now．          I believe if you work hard you'll make some progress．Good luck!
                                                         Yours，
                                                          Yang yang．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
As a student，it's important for you to study hard to get more knowledge．
句中所用句型為：It is+形容詞+for sb to do sth，其中"it"為形式主語，代指"to study hard"．這句話意為：作為一名學(xué)生，努力學(xué)習(xí)來獲得更多的知識是非常重要的．
高分句型二：
I'm sure you'll make great progress and pass the final exam．
句中"you'll make great progress and pass the final exam"為從句，其中涉及到的短語有"make great progress 取得很大進(jìn)步"．這句話意為：我相信你能取得很大進(jìn)步并通過考試的．

解答 Dear Paula，
I'm sorry to hear you are in trouble now．I can understand your feeling．But I don't think it is right for you to do things like that．Don't worry．Here are some suggestions for you．（開篇點題）
As a student，it's important for you to study hard to get more knowledge．【高分句型一】So I think doing homework is necessary and useful．You should do your homework first．If it is not too late，you can play computer games for a while．Remember to go to bed as early as possible，then you won't feel tired the next day．
In class，you need to listen to the teachers carefully and take notes．What's more，it's important to take part in class activities，try to answer at least two questions each class．If you have any problems，ask your teachers or classmates for help．I'm sure you'll make great progress and pass the final exam．【高分句型二】（提出建議）
Good luck!（表達(dá)祝福）          Yours，Yang yang

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．