Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你叫Ben，應母校的邀請給學生們作演講。你的主題是“憶過去，談現(xiàn)在”，請根據(jù)表格寫一份演講稿，并對學弟學妹們提出希望。

	10年前	現(xiàn)在
職業(yè)	中學生	中央電視臺記者
飲食	垃圾食物一周兩次	每天喝咖啡
業(yè)余活動	愛打籃球	難以忍受肥皂劇
周邊環(huán)境	空氣(air)更新鮮	更多的車，更少的樹
Hopes：	……

My name is Ben. I’m so glad to give a speech here. Ten years ago, I studied here as a student. ________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

My name is Ben, I am so glad to give a speech here. Ten years ago, I studied here as a student. Now I am a reporter of CCTV.

In the past, I ate junk food twice a week. I loved playing basketball. But now I drink coffee every day. I like watching TV, but I can’t stand soap operas.

In the past, the air was much fresher than it is now. There are more cars but fewer trees now.

【解析】考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文要求寫一份演講稿。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。時態(tài)的選擇上應該是一般現(xiàn)在時與一般過去時兩種時態(tài)。本文能夠按照表格中所提供的信息，從不同方面對母校的過去與現(xiàn)在進行比較，時態(tài)把握非常準確。要點比較齊全，其中有合理的適當發(fā)揮。文章條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，層次分明。最后一段In the past, the air was much fresher than it is now. There are more cars but fewer trees now.比較級的使用是本文的亮點。